In an effort to remind myself of certain writing tools, I'm going to try and post a 'lesson' every Thursday.
Check action clauses for 'ing' and 'as.' Both indicate parallel action. Make sure the two actions connected by these words can be done at the same time. In example:
Walking under the bridge, I put on my shoes.
Okay, now that is pretty obvious...but you get the point.
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